Levels of youth crimes are increasing rapidly in youth cities around the world. What are the reasons for this and suggest some solutions. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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crimes done by youth around the world. While the main reason behind
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crime
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activities
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. The primary cause of
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of
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criminal
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of unemployment and poverty. The traditional
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teachings will not groom children
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skills and
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modern job requirements.
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majority of teenagers stop schooling at a very early age due to getting fed up with the outdated education systems
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countries.
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properly.
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number of teenagers will end up
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number of criminal
activities
.
For instance
, it is very easy for gangsters to employ young people who do not have any income for their criminal
activities
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if they are given little money for their daily expenses. A possible solution for
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create more employment opportunities to suit individual
competencies
. The governments should deploy a strategy to improve the standard of education and include all children
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a system which
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their skills and
competencies
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their contribution to
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society.
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should be created to provide employment for all skill levels and to provide equal respect for every profession.
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is not good
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mathematics, the opportunity should be provided to become an expert in that area.
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society, or
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if no proper recognition is given for his competency he will end up in the streets. In conclusion, nowadays there is a wide spread of criminal
activities
among youth and
this
is mainly due to unemployment and poverty. To address
this
issue governments should create more employment opportunities for them.
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