Your have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter · say how you heard about the plan · explain how you feel about it · ask for more information about it

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Dear Sir or Madam, It was recently informed that you are planning to build a shopping centre near Bristol Street. During a program broadcast yesterday on television, an advertisement with some of the

details

pertaining to the

project

was shown; but did not appear many times.

Hence

I am interested to know some information regarding the

project

and expect

this

project

will be welcomed by many. I seriously consider your

project

a timely requirement for the people living in

this

area.

Although

there are some mini-scaled shopping centres around the city, I believe

this

kind of mall will provide multiple benefits for the people living here.

Moreover

, it will help to boost local and international tourism as well. Since the

details

published are very much less at the moment, it would be great if you could provide more

details

about it. As one of the stakeholders of the

project

, I prefer to know some

details

related to the

project

such

as when you are going to build

this

, the size of the

project

and how the

project

will be beneficial for the community living here. Thank you for your attention in

this

regard and looking forward to hearing more

details

about it. Yours faithfully, Trevis Penny Resident-Bristol Street

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