Some believe that money for education should mainly be spent on better computers while others believe it would be better spent on teachers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

From the argument that some people believe that money should be mainly invested in better

computers

,

while

others believe it should be invested in

teachers

, I believe that both views have their justification, which shall be described

further

below. On one hand,

computers

are devices that can be used to access tons of knowledge and can be displayed in any format for better understanding.

For example

, chemical reaction formulas can be displayed in alphabetical form, in pictures, or even in animation which supports the

learner

to understand the root and consequences much easier compared to the whiteboard and teacher.

On the other hand

,

teachers

are

also

the key

for

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education to be successful since

teachers

can provide guidance to the student and analyze the gap of the

learner

to provide more tailor-made information or questions that help the

learner

to get a better understanding of topics.

This

ability to understand the

learner

’s needs makes

teachers

irreplaceable by machines, regardless of the development of

computers

.

To conclude

, considering both views above, I believe that we should invest money in

teachers

more than

computers

because

teachers

can design and customize the learning, and may use

computers

to support their teaching process. Human interaction is

also

one of the keys that can boost the curiosity of the student and

makes

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education more interesting to the

learner

. A balance between good devices that support the learning process and

teachers

that understand what the learners need will bring the best outcome education in modern society.