Students should pay the full cost of their own university studies, rather than having free education provided by the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There is an opinion that the state shouldn’t provide full scholarships for students in universities because they ought to pay for their own education. I completely disagree with

this

point of view for two reasons.

First

, it is better for the government to allow free studies since many talented individuals are lost. As we know, a plethora of people can’t afford to study at a university.

Therefore

, they give up their career. As for me,

this

is awful since the world loses a number of talented minds.

For instance

, admittedly, Beethoven is a genius, but in spite of

this

, he wouldn’t be as well off without studying with professors. Their lessons

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helped him develop his abilities.

Second

, if authorities don’t help, unemployment will rise.

Furthermore

, it would do serious damage to the economic aspect of life.

Consequently

, a part of society will be jobless and unable to open their own business or work as a doctor or scientist for their county.

For example

, a multitude of discoveries have enriched the ministry, and without the help of the nation, it wouldn’t be real. In conclusion,

this

essay does not support the idea that the power should not pay for higher education for their community because they will lose many talented individuals and the economy's statistics will suffer. As for me, the state should help it as much as possible.