The best way for governments to solve the problem of traffic congestion is providing free public transport in 24 hours per day, and seven days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, traffic jam is a debatable concern that many authorities are struggling to find solutions

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whether proving free

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reduces the greenhouse effect that private vehicles are emitting

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during peak hours.Commuters will take the bus rather than drive their own cars to get anywhere they need.

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there can

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,which is opposite to the bus.As a consequence, the number of vehicles automatically will decline during rush hours.

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, in Romania, the authorities organised a campaign that weekly will be a day free of charge in private transit means, and

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the number of

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had almost doubled.

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cheaper than private cars.

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communicating

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fuel and diesel. What is more,

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travelers

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do not have to spend money on the

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still believe that

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the environment and

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of long waiting hours in the lanes.

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