The best way for governments to solve the problem of traffic congestion is providing free public transport in 24 hours per day, and seven days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, traffic jam is a debatable concern that many authorities are struggling to find solutions
.
Change preposition
for.
show examples
whether proving free
Correct your spelling
transport
trasport
Correct your spelling
transport
or not,
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
is one of the
subtopic
Change to a plural noun
subtopics
show examples
of
this
issue. I strongly agree with
this
statement. There are some reasons for my agreement regarding
this
topic.
Firstly
, proving people with free public
transport
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
reduces the greenhouse effect that private vehicles are emitting
everyday
Replace the word
every day
show examples
,
in
Change preposition
apply
show examples
specially
Replace the word
especially
show examples
during peak hours.Commuters will take the bus rather than drive their own cars to get anywhere they need.
Moreover
,
in
Change preposition
apply
show examples
private
Add an article
the private
a private
show examples
vehicle
Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
show examples
there can
transport
only a limited number of
Correct your spelling
passengers
passangers
Correct your spelling
passengers
,which is opposite to the bus.As a consequence, the number of vehicles automatically will decline during rush hours.
For example
, in Romania, the authorities organised a campaign that weekly will be a day free of charge in private transit means, and
Correct your spelling
surprisingly
suprisingly
Correct your spelling
surprisingly
the number of
Correct your spelling
passengers
passangers
Correct your spelling
passengers
had almost doubled.
In addition
, public
transport
, buses, are
more
Change the word
apply
show examples
cheaper than private cars.
Correct your spelling
communicating
communiting
Correct your spelling
commuting
to work, the car owners have to pay almost
one
Add a hyphen
one-third
show examples
third
of their income
in
Change preposition
for
show examples
fuel and diesel. What is more,
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
travelers
Change the spelling
travellers
show examples
do not have to spend money on the
Correct your spelling
maintenance
maintance
Correct your spelling
maintenance
as they would do for their vehicles. those are some of the
reason
Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
show examples
for my accordance, towards making
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
public
transport
free. in
Correct your spelling
conclusion
coclusion
Correct your spelling
conclusion
,
although
it is believed that public
transport
is not that flexible and
Correct your spelling
comfortable
confortable
Correct your spelling
comfortable
for the
Correct your spelling
passengers
passangers
Correct your spelling
passengers
,
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
still believe that
this
could
safe
Replace the word
save
show examples
the environment and
also
solve the
problems
Fix the agreement mistake
problem
show examples
of long waiting hours in the lanes.
Submitted by dr.lurabraga on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: