Nowadays, there are many TV shows that allow ordinary people to go on television and become celebrities, even though really, they have no talent. People should not be allowed to go on TV shows unless they can demonstrate some skill or talent that is entertaining. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

There are controversial perspectives sparking a debate over

should

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we recognize one’s popularity easily. While some claim that we can become a celebrity just by appearing on TV without any

talent

in

my

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our

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life, the opposite makes a statement that we should control tightly some flairs with respect to someone before putting them on the public. In my opinion, while the former is valid to some extent, I consider myself an advocate of

latter

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the latter

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. Without a shadow of a doubt, in

this

day and age, a

person

can easily become famous without any

talent

. One function of celebrities is

bringing

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entertainment for everyone – one thing which does not require any expertise. There is a wealth of people- they just show off their capacity after

appear

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appearing

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on

the

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apply

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TV.

For example

, Kim Kardashian did not have

talent

when she became

a

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influential

person

. She is famous for having an incredible body, but

then

she demonstrated her business and recreational capability and became worthy of

celebrity

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a celebrity

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title.

Thus

, recognition of lack of

talent

should not apply

for

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to

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all celebrities.

In contrast

, there is a case that someone must have talents to become

superstar

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a superstar

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. In modern society, social media become popular and crucial, famous

person

is considered a standard of

community

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the community

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.

For instance

, Taylor Swift, who is renowned

with

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for

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soothing

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a soothing

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voice and many successful movie roles, is

also

a superb business entrepreneur.

Besides

she often organises charity events without PR by

press

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the press

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.

Hence

,

celebrity

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a celebrity

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is a well-known

person

with a wealth of followers

especially

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,especially

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the immature, they should be vetted in terms of capabilities by

ethical

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an ethical

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censorship board before

publicing

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publishing

in the media.

This

thing will avoid unnecessary consequences, which others will follow because they consider he/she their idol. To sum up, regarding

capability

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the capability

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of a well-known

person

, I think owning any sort of

talent

should be considered when we want to get fame. That idea will help society become better because

acclaimed

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an acclaimed

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person

is

also

a standard of society.