Nowadays, there are many TV shows that allow ordinary people to go on television and become celebrities, even though really, they have no talent. People should not be allowed to go on TV shows unless they can demonstrate some skill or talent that is entertaining. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

There are controversial perspectives sparking a debate over
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we recognize one’s popularity easily. While some claim that we can become a celebrity just by appearing on TV without any
talent
in
my
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life, the opposite makes a statement that we should control tightly some flairs with respect to someone before putting them on the public. In my opinion, while the former is valid to some extent, I consider myself an advocate of
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the latter
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. Without a shadow of a doubt, in
this
day and age, a
person
can easily become famous without any
talent
. One function of celebrities is
bringing
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entertainment for everyone – one thing which does not require any expertise. There is a wealth of people- they just show off their capacity after
appear
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on
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apply
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TV.
For example
, Kim Kardashian did not have
talent
when she became
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influential
person
. She is famous for having an incredible body, but
then
she demonstrated her business and recreational capability and became worthy of
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a celebrity
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title.
Thus
, recognition of lack of
talent
should not apply
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all celebrities.
In contrast
, there is a case that someone must have talents to become
superstar
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a superstar
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. In modern society, social media become popular and crucial, famous
person
is considered a standard of
community
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the community
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.
For instance
, Taylor Swift, who is renowned
with
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soothing
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a soothing
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voice and many successful movie roles, is
also
a superb business entrepreneur.
Besides
she often organises charity events without PR by
press
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the press
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.
Hence
,
celebrity
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a celebrity
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is a well-known
person
with a wealth of followers
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the immature, they should be vetted in terms of capabilities by
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censorship board before
publicing
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publishing
in the media.
This
thing will avoid unnecessary consequences, which others will follow because they consider he/she their idol. To sum up, regarding
capability
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the capability
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of a well-known
person
, I think owning any sort of
talent
should be considered when we want to get fame. That idea will help society become better because
acclaimed
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an acclaimed
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person
is
also
a standard of society.
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