To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects?

In today's world, the population grow up fast. The needs
of
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food
also
grow spontaneously with the population. As to support the huge amount of population, some countries are trying to make use of edible
insect
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insects
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as
food
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source
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. For having
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as
food
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source
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, there are more
goods
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than
harms
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for the world.
Firstly
, the nutrition of
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high as normal
food
.
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is
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of the
benefit
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of having insects. There are
lots
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of
nutrition
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such
as proteins inside each
insect
. Just a small
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consumption
comsumption
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consumption
can support human's daily nesseccities. It is important as being
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food
resources. Daily nesseccities of a large group of people can to supported by eating
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insect
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insects
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. The high nutrition level of
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is
one
of the
benefit
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of having
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insects
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as
food
.
In addition
, the reachable
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insect
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is way easier than other
food
. Insects are everywhere in
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nature
. It is easy to reach them and get a large amount of it.
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, it has a shorter them for
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them to grow. At the
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same
smae
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same
time,
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the insect
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insect
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insects
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may not need
human
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to take care
of
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. Not like plants like rice or fruit, people need to take care of it most of the time to let
it
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grow well. It is easier for people to consume
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as it is easy to reach.
However
, there are
also
harms
for
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having
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insects
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as
food
. The most serious impact is it will harm the
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also
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of the
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ecosystem
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. They are the
food
for some
of
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the animals
such
as
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a bird
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bird
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birds
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.
Also
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different
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are
also
the
food
of the others. If
human
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humans
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start consuming edible
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insects
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,
such
as
ant
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, it will cause a large group of
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disappear
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in
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nature
for
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a
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sudden
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. It
cause
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great harm to
the
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nature
as other animals may become lack
of
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food
. With the great
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decrease
degree
decrese
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decrease
of
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their
food
, those will get die because of staffing. It will cause a
break down
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of
ecosystem
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as
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a human
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human
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is consuming
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others
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others'
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creatures
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food
.
This
is
one
of the drawbacks of eating insects. In
conculde
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conclude
, there
are
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more
benefit
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benefits
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in
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having
insect
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as
food
.
However
, the drawback of harming the
ecosystem
is
in
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a
long term
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affect
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to
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the
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nature
. And human will
also
be affected in
one
day with the less type of species we can choose to it other than
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an insect
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insect
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insects
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.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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