Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their families. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible arguments on both sides, and say which side you personally support.
In the 21st century, with the rapid pace of everything, students find it difficult to manage their study load. Some people seem to argue that their spare
time
must be spent with their parents, while others are of an opinion that it is irrelevant. This
essay would put light on both views.
Firstly
, it is quite true to say that a child
must spare some time
to sit with his family even though if he is occupied with his work. It will benefit him in numerous ways and he can become a good individual of
society. Change preposition
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For instance
, he will have an understanding of ethical and moral values. Since a child
does not have sufficient knowledge of how to behave well and with etiquette, so he will develop his understanding in this
area as well. In addition
to this
, although
this
may be taught in schools as well, but
the way parents develop skills of how to be a responsible citizen of a society, no teacher can do Remove the conjunction
apply
this
.
On the contrary
, it is often considered a waste of time
by some people rather than being positive about it. Firstly
, it is due to the fact that students do not use their free time
to develop skills which will be beneficial in their academics. Even though sitting with family is mandatory but some individuals hold the view that it is irrelevant and a waste of time
. For example
, a student can use his time
on his hobbies and do something which would refresh his mind and heart. Moreover
, it is often considered negative since in some families there are some political issues going around and this
could create adverse effects on a child
's mindset. Such
as fights between relatives over financial matters.
In conclusion, I support the fact that it is mandatory for a child
to spend good quality time
with his family because by doing this
he can learn a lot and become a better civilian of society and serve it in an efficient and disciplined way.Submitted by taimoornadeem1 on
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