Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes ( for example working for charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to young children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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convincing evidence that, in order to meet the high demands, high

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should provide education beyond academic knowledge, promoting

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' life adaptability through soft skills

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. There are those who surmise that to solve

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issue volunteering activities among

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should be a mandatory addition to the high

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program. I strongly agree that

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practice contributes not only to the development of the psychological and emotional resilience of youth

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but

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to the expansion of their future career opportunities.

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, one of the better-known reasons why volunteering is essential for

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is that it promotes increasing socially significant skills

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as communication and relationship experience.

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loneliness and uselessness, so often familiar to adolescents, should not

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be ignored. Whereas, participating in joint volunteering and charity work helps young people cope with them through developing self-confidence, life satisfaction and positive social interactions.

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, the experiment among Vietnam

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showed that voluntary activities promote reducing social exclusion of adolescents and improving

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climate.

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, another cause for the necessity of volunteering in a high

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is that it promotes the development of professional skills, which could be beneficial to a future career.

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, providing extensive training,

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work allows

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for practicing

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practicing

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,

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skills

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as teamwork, problem-solving, communication and so on.

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,

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are often invited to undergo unpaid internships in various companies in order to plunge into the working atmosphere and feel like a part of a team, whereas

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internships usually turn into

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permanent job

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. In conclusion, I am firmly convinced that volunteer work as a part of an education program should not be overlooked.

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due to opportunities to maintain

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and emotional health of youth.