You travelled abroad and faced problems at airport. Write an letter to the airport manager and provide -your flight details -what is problem -suggest some improvements you want to see
Dear Sir/Madam,
This
humble piece of Linking Words
a
paper wishes to raise your attention to some aspects of Correct article usage
apply
airport
Use synonyms
service
that I have faced Use synonyms
last
week. I am afraid but,I never expected Linking Words
this
kind of Linking Words
service
.
My name is Misbaha and I Use synonyms
had
travelled from IGI Unnecessary verb
apply
Airport
Delhi to Dubai for family holidays.My flight number was AI-239 Use synonyms
that
departed at 6 pm according to Indian time and landed there around 10:30 pm.
In fact, it was Correct pronoun usage
which
pleasant
journey,Add an article
a pleasant
however
regarding the Linking Words
airport
Use synonyms
service
It made me a bit sad. Use synonyms
To begin
, I waited one hour for immigration clearance in Linking Words
long
queue. As my family was with me so, its was became harsher to manage my children because they started crying. Even though, I requested from the Add an article
a long
the long
airport
staff that my children are feeling uncomfortable yet Use synonyms
on
one turned to me.
Once I reached to counter Correct your spelling
no
then
I asked to officerLinking Words
that
why only two counters are operating, and he replied to me in Correct word choice
apply
mannerless
way that it is not non of Change the article
a mannerless
your
business Correct pronoun usage
my
subsequently
,I feel humiliated.
I would to like emphasize that please some amendment is really needed in terms of Linking Words
service
and hospitality. Use synonyms
Firstly
,Linking Words
Airport
staff must be polite as it reflects our nation’s image on an international level.
Use synonyms
Secondly
, there must several counters open to avoid any Linking Words
inconvenient
Replace the word
inconvenience
of
passengers along with some Change preposition
to
Correct your spelling
emergency
emgergency
Correct your spelling
emergency
service
if required.
Use synonyms
Correct your spelling
Prompt
Prombt
response is highly appreciable and I am looking forward to Change noun form
Prombt's
hear
from your side.
Yours Sincerely
Misbah MzahirChange the verb form
hearing
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.