Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some

people

say it is very important

build

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new

houses

and some

people

think that it is necessary to plant a

lot

of

trees

. I agree

in

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the

second

option that it is important to plant

trees

for our ecology. On one hand, many

people

prefer to have a

lot

of

houses

in their cities to meet their housing needs. They think that if beautiful and huge buildings

are

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also

build in our cities,

then

our cities will

also

develop and all tourists will come to us. And

i

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think that if

houses

are built in open

spaces

, there will be very a

lot

of problems,

for

example

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these

houses

will be very expensive.

Therefore

, those

people

encourage the use of open

spaces

as additional housing zones to close

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the

that

tha

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the

market gap and the city officials change many internal open areas and gardens into residential projects.

On the other hand

, planting

trees

in open

spaces

has numerous benefits.

Firstly

, when there are many

trees

these

trees

give a

lot

of oxygen and a conducive atmosphere for

people

. So

i

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think it is better to plant

trees

than

these

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huge

building

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buildings

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.

For example

, in my

country

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they only build a building, and they cut down

trees

. If

the

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they

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open a green space for recreation so that there would be a

lot

of

trees

and

people

can breathe fresh real air there. In conclusion,

although

some

people

still agree to build

new

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building

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buildings

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in open

spaces

,

but

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if look from my point of view

i

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think that planting

trees

is very useful and will give ecology a

lot

of

improve

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our level.