Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some
people
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say it is very important
build
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new
houses
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and some
people
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think that it is necessary to plant a
lot
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of
trees
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. I agree
in
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the
second
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option that it is important to plant
trees
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for our ecology. On one hand, many
people
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prefer to have a
lot
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of
houses
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in their cities to meet their housing needs. They think that if beautiful and huge buildings
are
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are also built
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also
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build in our cities,
then
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our cities will
also
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develop and all tourists will come to us. And
i
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think that if
houses
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are built in open
spaces
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, there will be very a
lot
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of problems,
for
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example
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these
houses
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will be very expensive.
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, those
people
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encourage the use of open
spaces
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as additional housing zones to close
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the
that
tha
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the
market gap and the city officials change many internal open areas and gardens into residential projects.
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, planting
trees
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in open
spaces
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has numerous benefits.
Firstly
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, when there are many
trees
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these
trees
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give a
lot
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of oxygen and a conducive atmosphere for
people
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. So
i
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think it is better to plant
trees
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than
these
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in these
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huge
building
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buildings
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.
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, in my
country
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they only build a building, and they cut down
trees
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. If
the
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they
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open a green space for recreation so that there would be a
lot
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of
trees
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and
people
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can breathe fresh real air there. In conclusion,
although
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some
people
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still agree to build
new
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a new
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building
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buildings
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in open
spaces
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,
but
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if look from my point of view
i
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I
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think that planting
trees
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is very useful and will give ecology a
lot
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of
improve
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our level.
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