The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 200, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of years.

The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 200, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of years.
The first bar chart illustrates the figures for divorced and married people in the USA by 30 years,
while
the second chart shows the percentage of the marital status of adult Americans in 1970 and 2000. It is worth mentioning that the number of marriages steadily decreased between 1970 and 2000,
while
the figures for divorced adults have been fluctuating until the end of the period. The majority of Americans were married in both years, but by 2000 proportions of single people increased remarkably. In the first chart, at the beginning of the
period
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there were 2.5
million
marriages in America and 1
million
divorces. After one decade the marriage stayed constant,
whereas
the divorce rate rose by 0.5
million
approximately before falling back to 1
million
in 2000.
However
, between the two
last
decades, the rate of marriages has been decreasing from 2.5 to 2 respectively. At the beginning of the term, the percentage of married American people was about 70% and it marginally dropped to 60% in 2000. In the end, widowed citizens of the USA were lesser than in 1970.
In contrast
, the proportion of single adults and divorcees experienced an increase of 10 % roughly.
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