Some people say that we do not need printed newspaper any more. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In the modern
world
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, the number of people who abandoned
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paper based
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news
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and shifted to online
news
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through mobile or PC has rapidly increased.
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, many citizens believe that there
is
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no
needs
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anymore for
printed
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newspaper
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newspapers
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. On
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account, I strongly agree with
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opinion and have a belief that before long, men and women in the
world
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will completely shift their
news
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source
to
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online.
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is based on the fact that newspaper is not good for the environment and
is
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has
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disadvantages
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disadvantags
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disadvantages
due to
its
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inflexibility and slowness to
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information. I will discuss these in
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essay. The
first
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demerit of paper-based
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is its damage to natural resources.
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, they use
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amount of
papers
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made from trees and after one day, the papers become wastes
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homes and offices.
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, for transporting the papers,
distributers
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need to use cars and trains which emit CO2. Inc to print
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is
also
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bad for the environment. To sum up, the
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newspaper journey is against
eco-friendly
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society. The
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drawback of printed daily
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is its inflexibility.
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, in the case of online
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, the reporters can easily update
status
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of
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as soon as situations change,
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, for
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paper based
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media, they need
reprint
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, slow to catch up
the
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speed of the
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.
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Web based
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news
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are
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much valuable to show
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things as stock prices, the weather, and reports of
sport
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games. As
such
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,
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paper based
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media is not up to date with the current
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ever-changing
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ever changing
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world
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situation. In conclusion, I believe paper-based
news
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is a thing of the past and we do not need it anymore. it is bad for the environment and
slow
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to give us information. luckily, we have a better vehicle to get higher quality
news
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more quickly, namely
internet
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the internet
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.
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