A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions on how to care for your pet • describe other household duties

#friend #house #pet #holiday #contact #instructions #care #household #duties

Hey jack, It is been a long time

that

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since

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I haven’t heard from you. I hope you will be fine and your family members are

also

doing well. The reason behind writing

this

letter to you

that

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is that

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I am really grateful to you as you admitted to

take

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care of my house and pet during my absence. As

you

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areyou

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aware about

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hectic job that I work round the clock. Since

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I got my vacation approval I was not only anxious

for

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about

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house

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the house

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but

also

keener

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my dog Tommy. In fact, once I asked you and you agreed

upon

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I was chuffed. I am flying to Toronto on 21 December

therefore

; I want to inform you

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of some

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crucial things. Perhaps my cell phone number will not be working

however

, I will available to answer your

any

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query by mail if any rise. My Tommy is very sensitive in terms of morning walk so request to you please don’t miss his morning work. Apart from that, you can give him food twice in

day

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a day

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Furthermore

, do not forget to open the switch of

outside

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the outside

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light

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, no one is at home. In

morning

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the morning

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, you will find the newspaper hanging on

door

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the door

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as I have instructed to newspaper vendor so, please keep

inside

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it inside

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. Rest, you know well and you can find the keys

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my house from my neighbour. Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes, MISBAHA

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

One main idea per paragraph

Include greeting and closing

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical resource: 4.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms

Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 9.0

Answer all parts of the question

Use an appropriate tone

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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions on how to care for your pet • describe other household duties

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity, How could it be tackled?

Task 2: Some people believe that young people know about international pop and movie stars but know very less about famous people from the history in their own country. Why is this? How can more interest be created in young people to gain more knowledge about their own famous people from history?

In the running days, some people believe that traveling under the supervision of tour guide is the best approach as compared to going alone for tourorism. I partially agree with this point of view as traveling in a group with an expert and going alone has its own pros and cons.

Reading for pleasure can develop imagination and language skills better than watching TV. Do you agree or disagree?

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