A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions on how to care for your pet • describe other household duties
Hey jack,
It is been a long time
that
I haven’t heard from you. I hope you will be fine and your family members are Correct word choice
since
also
doing well. The reason behind writing Linking Words
this
letter to you Linking Words
that
I am really grateful to you as you admitted to Add a missing verb
is that
take
care of my house and pet during my absence.
As Change the verb form
taking
you
aware about Add a verb
areyou
wereyou
my
hectic job that I work round the clock. SinceChange the pronoun
the
,
I got my vacation approval I was not only anxious Remove the comma
apply
for
Change preposition
about
house
but Add an article
the house
a house
also
keener Linking Words
to
my dog Tommy. In fact, once I asked you and you agreed Change preposition
on
upon
I was chuffed.
I am flying to Toronto on 21 December Change preposition
to
therefore
; I want to inform you Linking Words
some
crucial things. Perhaps my cell phone number will not be working Change preposition
of some
however
, I will available to answer your Linking Words
any
query by mail if any rise. My Tommy is very sensitive in terms of morning walk so request to you please don’t miss his morning work. Apart from that, you can give him food twice in Correct quantifier usage
apply
day
.
Add an article
a day
Furthermore
, do not forget to open the switch of Linking Words
outside
lightCorrect article usage
the outside
despite
, no one is at home. In Change preposition
apply
morning
, you will find the newspaper hanging on Add an article
the morning
door
as I have instructed to newspaper vendor so, please keep Add an article
the door
inside
. Rest, you know well and you can find the keys Correct pronoun usage
it inside
of
my house from my neighbour.
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
MISBAHAChange preposition
to
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite