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a- Would you consider being a vlogger or blogger? b- What type of blogs or vlogs do you like to watch/read? c- Do you think blogging/vlogging is a challenging work?

#a- #vlogger #blogger #b- #type #blogs #vlogs #c- #work
Nowadays, social media is becoming important for most people. By posting videos, pictures or writing on platforms like Instagram, Facebook, and Snapchat. By doing that they can impress their thought, feelings and beliefs. I believe that I am a vlogger and a blogger because I do both.
Firstly
, following
vloggers
 with their short videos can be very interesting to watch. Especially, the ones who are very informative and can bring your mind to think about something else. The subjects that are fascinating to watch are politics, money and the environment. Of course, there are
also
vloggers
 who posting every day a new
video
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videos
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 about a game they are playing. I found those
vloggers
 not exciting but I think it is a difficult job because there are so many of those
vloggers
 on the market, and
therefore
 it is a lot of hard work for them to keep their audience satisfied. Sometimes I post a video but in ,general I write more on my platform.
Secondly
, posting a message on Facebook makes me
also
 a blogger. Only, not on regular bases make me less interesting to follow.
Therefore
, I believe being a serious blogger to keep up a blog can be a challenge. I follow my friends on Facebook but I have no interest in following bloggers. I prefer to read news articles
instead
. I found that more informative
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 bloggers. All in all, the world become more interesting by following bloggers and
vloggers
. There are some people who can make a living by posting a video or article every day but most of us do it to please and showing of how great life is.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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