In the last 20 years, there have been significant development in the field of information and technology, for example, the world wide web and communication by email. however, these developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive in the future. To what extend do you agree with this view.

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believe that the evolution of information and technology over the past few years can be positive for the future in terms of increased globalization.

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, others, including myself, argue that it can have adverse effects in the coming years. In

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essay, I will present that significant

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, like email communication and the

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world wide web

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, in IT can have negative implications on

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's lives in future because of the addiction to the

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and the increase in cyber attacks. Supporters of internet and email communication claim that these advancements in IT can connect humans globally without being physically present in front of each other and

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can save travel and time.

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can send urgent documents or files via email to any part of the earth, which usually takes days to reach there.

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, they can have official or personal meetings over video calls without travelling to other parts of the globe.

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, I would argue that

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can make individuals more unsocial, and they will stop mingling with other

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physically, even if they are staying nearby.

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, they may develop depression and other neurotic disorders.

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, I would argue that using more emails for communication and the

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world wide web

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may increase cyber-attacks, and individuals may lose their confidential data to scammers and frauds.

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, scammers use phishing emails to lure their victims into their trap and steal all their data, like bank details to withdraw money from their bank accounts.

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, addiction to the internet can make individuals less productive and may jeopardize their health. Numerous studies have shown that many

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waste most of their day browsing non-productive things on the internet and barely do

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physical activities.

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advancement in IT can

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develop serious health issues for the forthcoming generations. In conclusion,

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I acknowledge that improvements in information and technology can make the

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more globalized and can save time, I would argue that it can have more negative effects in forthcoming years in terms of increased data leaks via cyber attacks and more unproductive and unhealthy future generation

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its addiction.

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Your essay addresses the prompt and provides a clear perspective on the impact of IT developments. Make sure to fully develop each main point with specific examples and evidence.

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The essay demonstrates good logical structure and coherence in presenting ideas. Ensure that each paragraph is well-connected and follows a clear progression of thought.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

screen time
health issues
eye strain
posture
physical activity
privacy
security concerns
data breaches
identity theft
cyber-attacks
digital divide
marginalized communities
inequality
automation
AI (Artificial Intelligence)
job displacement
unemployment
new skills
mental health issues
anxiety
depression
social isolation
environmental impact
pollution
electronic waste

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