Some people believe that the only purpose for anyone to learn a second language is to travel or work abroad. Others argue that this is not the only purpose why someone needs to learn a second language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

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becoming too reliant on

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affected the skills of

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both skills and the

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statement

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tutors who have to keep away from the

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and go back to

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style. I disagree with both statements

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became life easier.

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, individuals are able to learn much easier and

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is not a villain for humans so

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need to use it more often.

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, teachers should embrace the student Nowadays,

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have turned into a mandatory item for every human.

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of individuals are using

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for basic needs including information, learning something,

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buying and selling items. Most importantly, scholars can learn everything from their

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computer can connect to another computer created by an

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network.

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that are connected to the

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can search for information via websites. Especially, posting guidelines about anything on the

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became habitual for human beings. A learning module about reading and writing is provided on the websites and the

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just need to search

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it. Scholars can learn via articles that someone posted or they can do it by watching youtube videos.

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, the benefit of

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for youngsters is that they have

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to learn anytime because the

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is never shut down.

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personal example, my tutor suggest

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writing

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by watching

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the youtube channel called IELTS Advantage.

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heavy workload, it helps me to understand complicated English words anytime and anywhere. I believe with

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used properly, anyone can learn better and faster. Alongside the

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that make life easier. Any

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must be used more often since machinery is a part of our society. The growth of computer

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has been evolving more rapidly. It helped industries to work efficiently. Specifically for the film industry, advanced

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software

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software

for writing

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script

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with AI continue to develop. It helped a lot of

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out there.

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,

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and teachers

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to be following and getting involved in

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advancement. In conclusion, I disagree with both statements, teachers must use

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to help

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learns.

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have benefits

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humankind

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humankind

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, people learn easier with

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because of

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networks and the

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one

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helped many industries to work effectively.