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Some people think that news has no connection with people’s lives; so it is a waste of time to read newspapers and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is often said that any source of
news
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,
such
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 as newspapers or television programs is a waste of time and has no benefit to the general public but I strongly believe
otherwise
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.
Firstly
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,
people
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 should be aware and kept up-to-date about situations and issues happening across the world, whether they may or may not affect them directly and despite their age. Not only does
this
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 produce an overall more considerate society but,
people
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also
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 tend to be more educated and well-rounded.
Secondly
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, many agree that it helps individuals improve their language skills in various ways.
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 as broadening their vocabulary and getting to explore a wide range of sentence structures and new ways to express ideas differently.
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 but not least, many
people
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 claim that reading the
news
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 has helped them pick up the habit of reading in general or allowed them to discover a new passion for a certain topic
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 as politics
for instance
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.
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, many argue that watching or reading the
news
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 can be boring as it is filled with a lot of uninteresting information.
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, many suggest that majority of broadcast outlets only cater to or target a specific audience
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 as older
people
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 and do not make any effort to try and get adolescence involved as well.
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, a large proportion of the general public is either students or individuals with 9 to 5 jobs.
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 leaves many who do not have enough leisure time
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, causing them to prefer spending the time they do have free on something more rewarding or interesting. In conclusion,
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 many argue that the
news
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 can be boring and unnecessary I think that it is a vital part of education as it is important to be aware of global issues affecting us now and those from the past.
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