Some people believe that it is more common way to learn history by watching movies instead of reading books. Does the advantages of this ought weight the disadvantages?

• In our modern life, few individuals point out that, it is one of the best ways to study
history
by watching
films
instead
of reading novels. From my point of view, there are
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many advantages
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learning
history
through
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films
rather than reading some kind of historical books. In
this
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history
through
movies
. • There are a number of significant benefits of learning
history
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of some countries quickly and easily by watching historical
films
rather than
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novels.
First
of all, if humans try to learn
history
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short time, it is the best way for it because some individuals believe that, humans remember
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better when they hear it than by reading it
in addition
, in
movies
, all the events are animated, people see them in real animated form and it will be easy to remember the event, they saw.
For example
, my mother is a
history
teacher and she told me that, if you want to learn
history
, you should be watching
movies
which
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about created
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for students when I ask her about how to learn
history
easily and in
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because my mother even learned
history
through
this
way and it was exceedingly effective. • Turing to the other side of the argument despite
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benefits it
also
has downsides.
First
of all, in all historical
films
, every
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are not depicted like in the books, because if
movies
are made based on every
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in the papers, the movie will be
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boring and will not interest the viewers,
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it will be really difficult to create them.
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, the
movies
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be interesting. • In conclusion having weighed everything mentioned
up
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and I can come to
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conclusion that, if people learning
history
, they should be watches historical
films
instead
of reading novels. From my point of view, it will be really beneficial to expand
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of everyone easily and quickly.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • engagement
  • relatable
  • accessibility
  • inclusive
  • vivid visuals
  • dramatic storytelling
  • visual and emotional experience
  • historical accuracy
  • potential misconceptions
  • biased view
  • simplification
  • complex historical events
  • limited runtime
  • incomplete understanding
  • historical nuances
  • superficial overview
  • varying perspectives
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