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Some people believe that it is more common way to learn history by watching movies instead of reading books. Does the advantages of this ought weight the disadvantages?

#people #history #movies #books #weight
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this
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 that several human beings
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 that the ideal method to acquire
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knowledge of ancient history from seeing
a films
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films
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 as an alternative
of
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 glancing
publications
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.I vehemently agree with
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 view.In
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this
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To begin
 with, it is straightforward to relate things in
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 as experiencing a mythology documentary is clearly distinct from scamming a story, which only lists the dry factual
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information
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 while making it impossible to
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 or
visualize
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 the relevant event.
Nevertheless
, motion pictures serve a significant educational role since they stick in
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 mind and stimulate particular
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date
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 analysis as we can imagine the scene and link
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 specific events in our lives.As an example, countless
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 just give a few forgettable paragraphs to an epoch or figure in order to fit it all in
therefore
 narrative never allows us to fully engage with it
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, animated films involve ancient figures like Abraham Lincoln to become real and practically conquer the world leap off the pages even fictional compositions can help us deeply grasp the time from the perspective of the common citizen rather than the greatest player.
Nevertheless
, there is a plethora of benefits, but
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 ignore the drawbacks of watching films to study history.
First
 and foremost, the main purpose of filmmaking is amusing, hardly instruction.
As a result
, only a few segments of the
dvd
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DVD
 can consider information, while the rest of improper
this
 procedure is
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 and should only be used to choose a small number of
clip
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 for input. To conclude,
although
 several humans think that the finest technique to acquire
skill
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 in history
through
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 literacy activities,I suppose that the
the
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greatest system to study
this
 is via viewing a film version of ancient events since we live in
the
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 world where
technology
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 system is skyrocketed which made learning process captivating which makes gaining knowledge much faster
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