Some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
There is a belief that hours are spent by
children
on their cell phones every day. In my opinion, Use synonyms
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happens mainly because of the lack of responsibility among modern parents. Linking Words
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, I think that Linking Words
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modern pattern causes more trouble than gives benefits. In Linking Words
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essay, I will consider Linking Words
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situation and express my own ideas.
Observing the causes, Modern parents, who are always busy because of hard work, spend much fewer hours playing or talking with their Linking Words
children
. Playing or watching videos on their smartphones are just ways to spend some free time Use synonyms
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with
children
who can hardly ever interact with their parents. Use synonyms
For example
, there are a lot of mothers who really can not play with their Linking Words
children
while cooking dinner or doing domestic chores. In Use synonyms
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situations giving Linking Words
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an endless way to play by themselves – is one of the options.
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On the other hand
, I think that a small number of interactions with people can cause a lot of Linking Words
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for a child in the future. Lack of social skills, studying Use synonyms
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For example
, spending more than two hours on phones a day, according to psychology experts, will cause a lot of Linking Words
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with physical and mental health Use synonyms
such
as bad vision(sight), anger, and reduced stress resistance.
To conclude, even though every parent can choose their own way of upbringing, they must be alerted about Linking Words
problems
caused by mobile devices. Use synonyms
However
, in my opinion, a cell phone as a problem-solving tool for a small amount of time among adults is one of the worst options.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite