Some people believe that it is more common way to learn history by watching movies instead of reading books.Does the advantages of this ought weight the disadvantages?

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Several towns prohibit special automobiles from inserting the downtowns and constrain individuals to make use of cycles and autobuses.From my point of view,it has more pros than cons but it
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • engagement
  • relatable
  • accessibility
  • inclusive
  • vivid visuals
  • dramatic storytelling
  • visual and emotional experience
  • historical accuracy
  • potential misconceptions
  • biased view
  • simplification
  • complex historical events
  • limited runtime
  • incomplete understanding
  • historical nuances
  • superficial overview
  • varying perspectives
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