Some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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on their smartphones on a daily basis, which has been caused chiefly by today’s cutting-edge technologies. Applying cell phones and their opportunities can positively result in

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but have more drawbacks though . In

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but highlight the latter. The principal cause of the condition that babies frequently use their pocket tablets is obviously modern IT developments and the internet.

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some entertainment

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as video games, which predominate among all apps, and some amusing series or cartoons. The immense amount of games in app stores on the web is

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frequent smartphone usage

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since perhaps the immature would have spent more

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learning something rather than degrading

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if there had been more useful and encouraging apps.

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, in the “App Store” the percentage of video games is roughly 75% of all the present apps. In most cases,

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are keen on some fun stuff which is extremely full on the internet, so the majority rather is negatively exposed from putting the usage of the technologies in high priorities of their routine.

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of all, using cell phones, they gradually become lazier and

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in the future are likely to not be able to deal with basic vital life obligations

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as cooking or home cleaning.

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, most of my friends who have younger siblings say that their brothers and sisters are so unadapted to basic things that the only solution is

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out their tablets.

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plenty of hours on little screens is likely

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to face mental and physical issues

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as gambling addiction,

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worse eyesight and

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, in a few occurrences when a child opens up his smartphone and uses it for his learning goals, taking some

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breaks between hours,

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should be a positive aspect. In conclusion, there are more disadvantages than advantages of

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spending a lot of

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on their cell phones because

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apply them for

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goals. For that reason, I would rather reckon that the

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technology is not generally any development, but simultaneously a kind of need all

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want so badly in their single childhood.