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Nowadays, distance-learning programs have gained in popularity, but some people argue that online courses can never be taken as good as those taken at a college or university in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Today's learning technique has changed because of technology. One of the recent methods is E-learning. So , E-learning is becoming more famous nowadays .
However
, It is argued by some people that online courses couldn't be taken as well as those who
is
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 learning at college or
university
.
This
 essay will carefully examine an issue in order to decide if agree or disagree. There is much evidence to show that online learning is the best way to learn the subject.
For example
,
students
 could have greater flexibility when they have scheduling their studies.
In other words
,
students
 can log into their computers and complete their studies without wasting time travelling and money on other expenses
such
 as travelling costs and meal costs. So they can utilize their valuable time for more studies or other tasks.
For instance
, If the student has homework to do, so they can do their homework after completing the lessons . And so we see how positively online learning is effective in in-person studying at
university
.
On the other hand
, there is other evidence which seems to show that the online learning method might be a negative development.
For example
,
students
 have limited feedback when they are learning lessons through the online system. One of the main features of traditional teaching is the instant feedback teachers give to their
students
. So, the student can solve their problems in the meantime. Personal feedback has a positive impact on the student learning the subject.
Moreover
,
students
 can have a discussion with their colleagues about the lessons at the
university
. we see
also
 how other evidence demonstrates the drawbacks of e-learning. We saw from the above how the learning system has changed. we
also
 saw how it is argued by some people that online courses couldn't be a good system of learning rather to
university
 or college. Having discussed the issue carefully it is my opinion that online learning is the better way to learn the subject.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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