Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir Trust
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letter finds you well. I am writing
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in reference to the news published on the college website regarding starting of the Tally - computer
course
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from the
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week of December. I have noticed that the
course
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is applicable to students who have completed their elementary
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,
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, despite the fact that I have not completed a similar
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, I would like to express my desire to attend the program.
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I have not officially studied computing, I have always had an interest in the same,
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I have been practising the basics at home. I am planning to take up a part-time job to support my family,
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however
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one of the requirements the company has requested is a certificate of completion in Tally. I would like to inquire if you could grant me special consideration to enrol and attend the
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, meanwhile, I shall try to manage to complete an elementary
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prior to releasing my certificate of completion for Tally. I look forward to your positive consideration Yours faithfully Sonu Jose
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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