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A friend you made while you were studying abroad has writlen to ask you for help in finding a job in your country, You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her, Write a letter to this friend, In your letter tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves say why you think the job would be suitable for him/ her explain how to apply for the job

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Dear Sara, I'm writing to you with regard to your claim of considering my country as your next working destination.
First,
I should express my happiness about your decision. Fortunately, I found out recently, that there are some opportunities available in my company. They are looking for someone as a manager in the grocery department.
Moreover
, I assume the job description is not too complicated for you and I attached it to my letter. I strongly believe the position is suitable for you,
due to
 your valuable background experience as a manager in your country. I should let you know there are several job perks,
such
 as dental benefits, in
this
 role. Let me explain the application process. You should begin with the process throw the online form which is available at the company site.
In addition
, I will be able to talk to my manager in person to reflect your interest in working here. I hope to see you soon. With love Ali
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coherence cohesion
To enhance the clarity of your letter, ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea. For example, discuss the job details in one paragraph, why it's suitable in the next, and the application process in another.
coherence cohesion
Improve your letter's logical structure by organizing the information in a clear, progressive manner. Begin with your initial excitement, then describe the job, followed by why you believe it’s suitable, and conclude with the application details.
task achievement
Address all parts of the task by mentioning specific skills or qualifications your friend has that make the job suitable, in addition to their experience as a manager.
task achievement
Maintain a consistent and appropriate tone throughout your letter to match the informal nature of writing to a friend.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job opportunity
  • potential candidate
  • company culture
  • role responsibilities
  • candidate qualifications
  • teamwork
  • project coordination
  • interpersonal skills
  • adaptability
  • cross-cultural proficiency
  • resume
  • cover letter
  • interview process
  • application deadline
  • reference letter
  • networking
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