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Many people use written language in less formal and relaxed way. Does this development have advantages and disadvantages?

In today’s modern world, it is becoming more and more popular among
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 to
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 of written
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 change happened due to several reasons and has its benefits and drawbacks.
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people
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 choose it over the formal
style
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 of written
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, because it is less
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 and way easier to comprehend.
The formal
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 of a complicated vocabulary as well as
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, paragraph spacing and paragraphing.
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, it takes quite a lot of time to write, while a less formal
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 is not that strict, so
people
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 prefer it because it is faster and simpler. One of its positive sides is that abbreviations, shorter messages and simpler structures save a tremendous amount of time. It is easier to explain something by simplifying messages, the reader will be able to understand information faster due to the simplicity of the text.
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, that
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 is used to lessen the formality of conversation. It helps
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 to win over their opponent
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 because simple sentences and words are easier to understand.
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, that
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 among friends may let them feel more tranquil and safe.
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, that type of written
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 has its drawbacks. It is not suitable for applying for a job.
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appropriate
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 for the occasion. It is
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important
 to
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 a level of education, and it is known that formal
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 shows erudition and intelligence.
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, those who apply to college or university
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 must
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 an academic
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 of writing in their personal statement to
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 how skilled and educated they are. It may help to
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 that they are passionate about their choices and take
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 assignments seriously. Applicants, who
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 formal
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 have low chances to get to
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 of their dreams, abbreviations, slang and mistakes will lessen the chances of their personal statement
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 remarkable and catchy. In conclusion, even though informal written
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 may raise writing speed and ease writing and understanding. That type of writing ruins the beauty of the
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 and may lower the chances of living a dream life.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • informality
  • digital communication
  • texting
  • social media
  • instant messaging
  • generational shifts
  • brevity
  • personal expression
  • language standards
  • erosion
  • interlocutors
  • emojis
  • internet slang
  • academic contexts
  • language learning
  • misunderstandings
  • language teaching
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