More and more students are going to another country for higher education. Do the advantage of this outweigh disadvantage?

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have

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been

rapid

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increase in the

number's

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of people that go to university in a foreign

country

. In my own opinion,I think the advantage outweigh the disadvantage if

one

is leaving

from

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a developing

country

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a developed

country

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essay will be discussing the reasons and benefits as well as the downside.

Firstly

, the search for new knowledge has been a great deal for some individuals and they feel the need to achieve

this

traveling

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to another

country

especially if that

country

is specialized

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the aspect they want to

study

For instance

, my cousin always want to

study

medicine since childhood,so when he was of age, he researched about it and found out that some countries like India,USA and Germany have the best doctors and he decided to school in

USA

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other

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for him to learn from them and practice in his

country

with the newly acquired skills.

In addition

, some people

also

think that it

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convenient,easier and faster to school outside their geographical location.

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,in Nigeria to

study

nursing is up to 5years and the syllabus is so tight that it

difficult

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for

one

to work and

study

at the same time but in Ghana,

nursing

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program is 4years and their syllabus is developed so that their students can work and

study

at the same period, for

this

reason

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a Nigerian may think of studying nursing in Ghana rather than their home

country

However

, there is

also

some disadvantage of school outside

one

country

such

as finance,cultural shock, loneliness etc.The amount of money spent on schooling aboard is alarming

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most universities preferred being paid in dollars and

this

can cause financial bother

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the family.

Furthermore

, the

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in cultures

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always frustrating sometimes and difficult to adapt

and

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lastly

, loneliness terms to occur especially

one's

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first

year because

one

is still trying to adapt to new changes. In conclusion,

although

they are negative effects

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studying in another

country

but

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one

is determined and has

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good family support, it

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better schooling outside

one

country

to acquire more skills in different aspects of life.

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