Some people think that television has destroyed communication among friends and family. What extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is believed by some people that
television
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is increasing the distance between family and
friends
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. But in my
opinion
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i
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think that people can sit and enjoy
TV
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with them.
Television
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has many
programs
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such
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as sports and educational
programs
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that bring family and
friends
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together.
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of all,
television
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is the main
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of entertainment. Due to the whole day's activities people’s
body
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bodies
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,
mind
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minds
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and
brain
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brains
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are very badly affected.
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sadness can be removed by watching
TV
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.
However
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, the recent Football World Cup held on 20 th November 2022 is an example of
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,it is seen that every member of the family from small children to
elderly
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the elderly
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all sit together and enjoy
the
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each football match on the
TV
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screen. In many places the
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bazar
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bazaar
and even in the rural environment the big
television
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screen is pulled up and all the
friends
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and the villagers are watching the game together.
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,
i
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watched
the
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Brazil vs Serbia match on November 25th at 1:00 am with my whole family.
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, apart from
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there are many
programs
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that we watch on
the
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television
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,
educational
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and educational
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programs
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are one of them.There are
also
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many families who believe that there is no alternative to quiz
programs
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for educating children as well as entertaining them.After dinner,most of the families who sit together gossip and watch these series. Nowadays,
friends
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share
english
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movie links
to
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with
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each other to improve their
english
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skills and most of the time they watch together.
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,
i
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always enjoy
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the con
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banega
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Banega
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kaur
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paati quiz show on
somoy
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some
TV
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with my dad and he explains each question to me. In
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i
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think that
with
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by
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watching
television
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we get another great opportunity to get together with family and
friends
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which can not be thought of
otherwise
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.
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