Some people think that television has destroyed communication among friends and family. What extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed by some people that
television
is increasing the distance between family and
friends
. But in my
opinion
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i
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think that people can sit and enjoy
TV
with them.
Television
has many
programs
such
as sports and educational
programs
that bring family and
friends
together.
First
of all,
television
is the main
media
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of entertainment. Due to the whole day's activities people’s
body
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bodies
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,
mind
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minds
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and
brain
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brains
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are very badly affected.
This
sadness can be removed by watching
TV
.
However
, the recent Football World Cup held on 20 th November 2022 is an example of
this
,it is seen that every member of the family from small children to
elderly
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all sit together and enjoy
the
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each football match on the
TV
screen. In many places the
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bazar
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bazaar
and even in the rural environment the big
television
screen is pulled up and all the
friends
and the villagers are watching the game together.
For example
,
i
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watched
the
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Brazil vs Serbia match on November 25th at 1:00 am with my whole family.
Secondly
, apart from
sports
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there are many
programs
that we watch on
the
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television
,
educational
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and educational
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programs
are one of them.There are
also
many families who believe that there is no alternative to quiz
programs
for educating children as well as entertaining them.After dinner,most of the families who sit together gossip and watch these series. Nowadays,
friends
share
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movie links
to
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each other to improve their
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skills and most of the time they watch together.
For instance
,
i
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always enjoy
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banega
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kaur
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paati quiz show on
somoy
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some
TV
with my dad and he explains each question to me. In
conclusion
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i
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think that
with
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watching
television
we get another great opportunity to get together with family and
friends
which can not be thought of
otherwise
.
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