Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individual and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree
In
this
modern era, it is considered that social media
deeply influenced society
. Some people argue that social sites and apps
have negatively affected society
as well as Add an article
an individual
individual
while Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
other
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others
oppose
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However
, I completely disagree this
idea.
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with this
To begin
with, this
is a technology era and a person who is not using the
social app is not able to compete with Correct article usage
apply
society
. To be more precise,as
all the business and official deals are done via different Correct word choice
apply
apps
. In fact,official meetings and transactions are also
executed by using a different online applications
. Correct the article-noun agreement
different online applications
a different online application
For instance
, in Pakistan at school
all the administrative work is managed and updated by using Add a comma
,school
Punjab
SIS application. Supervisors of the institute, have to connect to Correct article usage
the Punjab
internet
to get Add an article
the internet
latest
e-mails Correct article usage
the latest
by
higher authorities. Change preposition
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This
will not only reduce the cost of management but also
made the transmission of orders faster than a manual system. Hence
,keeping such
advantages every field is launching its own apps
to work efficiently.
On the other hand
, excessive use
of anything is bad for health. Correct your spelling
Overuse
Over
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Overuse
use
of social media
has made people Correct your spelling
addicted
addiction
addictor
. Correct your spelling
addicted
Public
is more Add an article
The public
introverts
due to Replace the word
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extra
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the extra
use
of mobile phones and latest
technology. Correct article usage
the latest
In addition
to it, human
does not like to spend leisure time with each other.Rather than spending their time Add an article
the human
a human
in
playing online games and making videos on Tiktok, people should enjoy Change preposition
apply
company
of their fellows. To exemplify, a large number of users died every year due to selfies fever by accidents. To elucidate more, for the sake of popularity on social Add an article
the company
media
young generation is doing some unethical activities, which do not suite
a civilized Correct your spelling
suit
society
. This
trend should be banned and there should be moderate use
of social media
.
In conclusion, it is needless to say social media
is part of our lives. Advancement of technology has made our lives much easier and cheaper than earlier and launching
of new Correct article usage
the launching
apps
is also
thriving which is official
beneficial for us. Meanwhile, extra Change the word
officially
use
of social media
is also
having bad
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a bad
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effect
affect
on Correct your spelling
effect
society
, which should be minimized to some level.Submitted by misbahamzahir8 on
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