Many people believe that schools should teach to become good citizens and workers rather than independent individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Schools

are a fundamental part of

everyone

's life. According to some people,

schools

should teach every student to become a responsible citizen and good social

workers

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,

instead

of being self-dependent. I am completely agreed with

this

thinking, and it should be implemented. In

this

essay, I shall write my supporting points to it. At the outset, a

person

spends one-

third

of his life in school. He learns a lot of things over a period of his life from there. During school days

everyone

is in their learning stage and grasping power is quick, so it is better to teach every peer to become a good citizen by teaching them social values.

For example

, institutions should teach their students to help each other

,

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and to respect their elders. In fact, institutions should

also

help students in doing group tasks so that they can work in

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world in the near future.

Therefore

, there are many benefits if

schools

provide these skills to their students.

Furthermore

, becoming an independent individual is not a bad thing,

however

, it

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does not

doesn't

doesnot

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does not

help in the development of a nation. A

countries

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development is only possible if all the people living in that country are

good

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citizen

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. They value their society living in and contribute

in

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its improvement.

For instance

, if a

person

helps in

cleaning

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surroundings

sorroundings

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surroundings

and

also

helps in decreasing pollution,

then

it will help

everyone

.

Hence

,

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person

is more important than an independent individual. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that

schools

should teach a

person

moral values

instead

of being independent individual, as

this

will help

everyone

living in a society and leads to

development

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the development

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of a nation.