In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight. How far do you agree with either of these views?

Little ones are very delicate and vulnerable creatures. Some countries prefer to start their formal

education

at the

age

of four whilst others prefer it to be at a late

age

. Albeit formal

education

is very important, I strongly believe

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early

education

is stressful for

the

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children

.

This

essay will extensively explain reasons to support my opinion based on real-life examples.

To begin

with, it is clear that young

age

is very fragile and delicate, for

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whatever is taught at

this

age

retain in mind for a long time, if

children

visit school it will inculcate skills. If those skills are learnt efficiently and they will be useful in the future. To illustrate with

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example, one recent research has indicated that

children

’s minds fully develop at the

age

of four.

Furthermore

, reaching and leaving different institutions at

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time

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support them to maintain discipline.

Consequently

,

this

approach leads to a disciplined lifestyle and

prosperous

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future.

Hence

, by starting formal

education

at an early

age

, they learn and grow.

On the other hand

. Formal

education

at a tender

age

can have some severe consequences.

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is the

age

of physical as well as

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growth.

For instance

, an experiment conducted in one country proved that

children

, who start formal

education

late, are more active and physically fit. It is not a secret that the burden of daily school life provokes stress in them, which

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detrimental effects. Despite formal, informal

education

is a great alternative.

Children

can be taught while playing. So

this

will be fruitful for their development.

Therefore

, formal rudimentary

education

after the

age

of eight is beneficial for their overall growth. In a nutshell,

education

is crucial and vital for our offspring, but starting at a right time.

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is the

age

of learning while being entertained , so I strongly believe that formal classical

education

should be mandatory after

children

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eight years old.