An overseas friend wants to visit your country on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Recommend the best time of year to visit and why Describe the types of accommodation your friend could choose

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Dear Ahmed, I am writing to you regarding spending your

holiday in my hometown Cairo,Egypt.I am glad to see you soon and you are welcome anytime.Please make yourself at home.

However

, I would like to recommend you the best time of the year for your visit.Actually, it's from the end of September up to mid-October,for several reasons.

First

, the weather will be between summer and winter so the temperature will be mild .

Second

,since it is not high season prices will be affordable like

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tourist places ,accommodations and transportation.

Moreover

, I would suggest booking from AIR BNB

instead

of hotels ,because even though it's low season, still hotel prices are higher compared to private apartments .

Furthermore

,you can book a shared apartment,studio or even your own room , we got a variety of options here.

Finally

,the best place to stay

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New Cairo, the Fifth district far from Cairo's traffic areas. Looking forward to meeting you, Best Regards,

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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156 words

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