You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain – Why you are selling the television Describe the television Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it

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Dear Ali, Hope you are doing well, I'm writing you
this
letter regarding selling my
television
,and I remember you told me
last
time we met that you are thinking of buying a new
television
. Actually,after purchasing the
television
I'm willing to sell you, I received an email from Headquarters in Singapore informing me that I will be transferred
next
week to our office in London.
However
,all my furniture and appliances I sold them already online
last
week.
Furthermore
,I did not upload the
television
online in case you want it.
However
, it's a Samsung smart
television
that comes with Wifi
of
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course , a size of 50 inches and a 4k screen. Plus, it comes with
warrant
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of
you
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5 years from the store,easily carried and I still did not throw away the box it came with .
Finally
,if it's fine with you , I will be available by tomorrow afternoon at 12:30 sharp, if you are interested to come and take look and afterwards decide whether you will take it or not. Best Regards,
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