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Band 6.5

You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain – Why you are selling the television Describe the television Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it

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Dear Ali, Hope you are doing well, I'm writing you
this
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 letter regarding selling my
television
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 ,and I remember you told me
last
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 time we met that you are thinking of buying a new
television
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. Actually,after purchasing the
television
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 I'm willing to sell you, I received an email from Headquarters in Singapore informing me that I will be transferred
next
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 week to our office in London.
However
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,all my furniture and appliances I sold them already online
last
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 week.
Furthermore
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,I did not upload the
television
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 online in case you want it.
However
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, it's a Samsung smart
television
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 that comes with Wifi
of
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,of
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 course , a size of 50 inches and a 4k screen. Plus, it comes with
warrant
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a warrant
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of
you
yof
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of
5 years from the store,easily carried and I still did not throw away the box it came with .
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,if it's fine with you , I will be available by tomorrow afternoon at 12:30 sharp, if you are interested to come and take look and afterwards decide whether you will take it or not. Best Regards,

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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