Some people think that the best way to reduce the time spent in travelling to work is to replace parks and gardens close to the city center with apartment buildings for commuters, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent times, professional people's

time

wasted due to traffic congestion. It is considered

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many individuals that the finest approach to lessen

time

when

they

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commuting

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is to substitute

parks

and gardens close to the city

center

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with commuter

residence

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, whereas others reject

this

notion. In

this

essay, I will explain both sides of the perception and disagree with the idea which

is replace

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parks

with

residential

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a residential

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area

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. To commence with, there are several

advantage

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to be shared why

parks

required

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to be replaced with apartments.

First

of all, professionals are engaged with various official

liability

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despite that they have to waste their

time

unwillingly

for

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traffic congestion.

As a result

, they need to decrease their regular commuting period by

relocate

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near

to

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the

center

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of

metropolis

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the metropolis

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.

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, commuters in Dhaka metropolis

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are wasting their

time

during

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standing for transport.

Therefore

, if their residence

close

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to the workplace,

then

transportation

expense

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as well as precious

time

that

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can be

utilize

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effective

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way.

On the contrary

, many individuals want to keep green

area

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such

as

parks

and gardens. The primary reason behind their remark is that nature conservation that

lead

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to

keep

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environment

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free from pollution. Citizens who are living in

metropolis

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a metropolis

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they

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can pass leisure

time

in the park. Another point is that

instead

of replacing gardens authorities can construct

flyover

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or underground metro. Professionals can reduce travel

time

by using

those transportation

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.

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, in Tokyo, working people

commuting

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through

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metro

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the metro

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which is

time

efficient for them. To conclude, traffic congestion is

common

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issue around big cities in that case replacement of greenery is not rational. In order to reduce

commuting

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the commuting

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period we need

new

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communication

medium

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like flyover or overpass.