Some people think that the best way to reduce the time spent in travelling to work is to replace parks and gardens close to the city center with apartment buildings for commuters, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent times, professional people's
time
wasted due to traffic congestion. It is considered by
many individuals that the finest approach to lessen Change preposition
apply
time
when they
Correct pronoun usage
apply
commuting
is to substitute Wrong verb form
commute
parks
and gardens close to the city center
with commuter Change the spelling
centre
residence
, whereas others reject Fix the agreement mistake
residences
this
notion. In this
essay, I will explain both sides of the perception and disagree with the idea which is replace
Change the verb form
replaces
parks
with residential
Add an article
a residential
the residential
area
.
To commence with, there are several Fix the agreement mistake
areas
advantage
to be shared why Change to a plural noun
advantages
parks
required
to be replaced with apartments. Add a missing verb
are required
First
of all, professionals are engaged with various official liability
despite that they have to waste their Fix the agreement mistake
liabilities
time
unwillingly for
traffic congestion. Change preposition
in
As a result
, they need to decrease their regular commuting period by relocate
near Change the verb form
relocating
to
the Change preposition
apply
center
of Change the spelling
centre
metropolis
. Add an article
the metropolis
a metropolis
For example
, commuters in Dhaka metropolis they
are wasting their Correct pronoun usage
apply
time
during
standing for transport. Change preposition
apply
Therefore
, if their residence close
to the workplace, Add a missing verb
is close
then
transportation expense
as well as precious Fix the agreement mistake
expenses
time
that
can be Correct pronoun usage
apply
utilize
Wrong verb form
utilised
effective
way.
Change the word
effectively
On the contrary
, many individuals want to keep green area
Change the noun form
areas
such
as parks
and gardens. The primary reason behind their remark is that nature conservation that lead
to Change the verb form
leads
keep
Wrong verb form
keeping
environment
free from pollution. Citizens who are living in Add an article
the environment
metropolis
Correct article usage
a metropolis
they
can pass leisure Correct pronoun usage
apply
time
in the park. Another point is that instead
of replacing gardens authorities can construct flyover
or underground metro. Professionals can reduce travel Fix the agreement mistake
flyovers
time
by using those transportation
. Change the determiner
that transportation
For instance
, in Tokyo, working people commuting
Wrong verb form
commute
through
Change preposition
by
metro
which is Correct article usage
the metro
time
efficient for them.
To conclude, traffic congestion is common
issue around big cities in that case replacement of greenery is not rational. In order to reduce Add an article
a common
commuting
period we need Correct article usage
the commuting
new
communication Correct article usage
a new
medium
like flyover or overpass.Fix the agreement mistake
mediums
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