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Many people use written language in less formal and relaxed way. Does this development have advantages and disadvantages?

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Nowadays, many
people
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 tend to
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 a more informal style for their writing due to its convenience.
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 tendency has both benefits and drawbacks, which will be discussed
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. What could be regarded as a clear advantage of informal writing is saving time. Lifestyle is accelerating, nowadays
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 are in a constant rush.
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, it is more convenient and flexible to
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 some abbreviations and to shorten grammar constructions in messages.
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, it is common to
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 “btw”
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 of “by the way” and “lol”
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 of “laugh out loud”.
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 trend is beneficial, as one could spend time on more essential things than just online chatting. The
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 advantage is an opportunity to become closer due to
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 style of communication. Formalities set boundaries, without them many
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 feel more self-confident and,
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, they become initiative.
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 style creates a personal, spontaneous atmosphere, shrinking the distance between
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.
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,
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 danger because of the widespread
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 of informal writing.
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 simplicity leads to the loss of extraordinary words and expressions.
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, nations lose their historical background and cultural identity. The
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 negative consequence is that using informal writing may cause misunderstandings and
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 thoughts. In some cases, informalities may be perceived as impoliteness and even disrespect. The absence of formal
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 destroys subordination. To conclude, it should be mentioned that both types of communication are indispensable as each of them is suitable for specific purposes.
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 the tendency of using informal
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 has pros and cons, formal written and spoken
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 cannot be fully replaced by informal.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • informality
  • digital communication
  • texting
  • social media
  • instant messaging
  • generational shifts
  • brevity
  • personal expression
  • language standards
  • erosion
  • interlocutors
  • emojis
  • internet slang
  • academic contexts
  • language learning
  • misunderstandings
  • language teaching
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