Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema other says to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in a cinema.

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Few people say that watching a
movie
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on our
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phones is a better
experience
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than going to a theatre while others believe to
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a
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completely one has to go to a theatre. In my opinion, I agree with the
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I'm going to explain both views. Convenience is one of the key benefits of seeing a motion picture on a
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phone
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while coming to the cinema hall atmosphere plays a huge role in involving and enjoying the cinema. Some people who are working overtime do not have ample amount of
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to book tickets to the
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and make a commute to the auditorium. So if they get some leisure
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, they use
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moment to watch a
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their mobile phones by sacrificing some of the amenities provided by the
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theatre-like huge screens, and background noise. sound speakers are the entertainment atmosphere.
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, a renowned
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was made with a budget of 1000 crores which was released in the theatre as a 3d
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. I watched that
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on a
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phone
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I did not feel that involvement and
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while watching it on the
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. In Your leisure
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if you want to spend
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quality
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with your friends and family, you can get a different type of action in the
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. If you're watching thriller movies with your friends that will be a memorable
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.
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, my cousin's visited my village in the summer holidays, so they were getting bored so we just decided to go to a place where a horror
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was playing and everyone got frightened by the spooky sounds and frightening scenes. My point is one can never
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those kinds of atmospheres if they are watching on a
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phone
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to get an unforgettable
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to a
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theater
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and save
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, you can use electronic devices to watch a picture with some compromises. I feel the former is better than the latter.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience
  • Mobile Viewing
  • Cost-efficient
  • Time-efficient
  • Personalized experience
  • Immersive
  • Cinematic experience
  • Surround sound
  • Collective experience
  • Technical superiority
  • Sensory experience
  • Social hubs
  • Cultural events
  • Distractions
  • Preservation
  • Filmmaking art
  • Cinematographic nuances
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