You are going to another country to study.you would like to do a part-time job while you are studying,so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend.In your letter Give details of your study plan Explain why you want to get a part time job Suggest hownyour frined could help you find a job.

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Dear Adam, Hi, How are you? I am writing to inform you that I will travel to Spain in two weeks for a full-time scholarship in Finance
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, I would like some pieces of advice related to living there and having a part-time job.
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, let me explain my study plan. I will be in Spain for two years, most of them will be in the capital city but in summer, I will be able to move around the country. During study days, I will be busy for 6 hours attending my lectures and going to the library preparing my case studies, but
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, I am having 2 days free rather than the weekend.
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, being free for some time, I would like your assistance to have a part-time job . In a matter of fact, I need
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work to help me cover my spent there as I know living in Spain costs a lot and I need an adequate source of income. In the end, I thought of writing to you as I know you live there for many years,
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you have a great experience of how I can find a job and where to look exactly.
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, is that any specific website we can use as a beginning? I am looking forward to meeting you. Best regards,
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