‘Nowadays, news companies spend a lot of money covering international news. However, local news is more relevant to people’s lives and should receive more funding.’ To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#‘nowadays #news #companies #money #people’s #lives

In the past ,media

news

cost was less as they were broadcasting only the local

news

but nowadays new media channels are covering the global

news

as well due to that they have been spending a lot of amount on that coverage.

However

, some feel that they should cover local

news

and give more funds to that as it is related to locals. I disagree with the above notion as In the contemporary world

people

need to know what is happening across the globe. The main persuasive argument in favour of spending more on global

news

is globalisation. It is widely believed that to make the nation and its citizen grow globalisation is mandatory, and

news

channels are playing an indispensable role in globalising

people

. If

people

are aware of the world industry and economy, they will prepare themselves

accordingly

such

as youth could migrate for work.

For instance

, In Canada, more than 100000 migrant workers come from different industries and

this

only gets possible because it is broadcast all over the world,and agencies are paying lots of money to broadcast as satellite charges are more.

Therefore

people

are being benefited from global

news

although

agencies are spending more on global

news

Secondly

, covering sports

news

is very costly these days and

people

are more interested in listening to sports

news

on television or on the radio. They get rejuvenated by listening to games commentary or information because of that new channels are ready to invest more.

For example

, in India media industry has been investing more than 1 billion to cover cricket

news

as their viewers or listener are interested in that kind of

news

Hence

this

also

part of human life to enjoy the games and so investing in global coverage is biased. In conclusion, not only global

news

are helping individual growth but

also

it has been exhilarated

people

by sharing information about their interests

such

as sports. I feel investing more money in international information is good for human well-being.

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