A friend of yours is thinking of going to a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: explain why you think your friend would enjoy camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go on camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Marija, I am very pleased to hear that you

finally

decided to go on a camping holiday and asked for my advice. I look forward to helping you and giving advice from my own experience and perspective. I think that you will enjoy

this

summer camping trip because the weather for the next couple of weeks is going to be great and the nature and landscapes that you will explore for ten days are going to be very beautiful and moving. In my opinion, you will feel uplifted and come back mentally improved and rested.

However

, you have to prepare for the possible weather changes, so take very practical clothes with you, that you

could

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can

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use

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wear

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not only for warmer days but

also

for colder ones.

Also

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prepare for wild animals that could get in your way, take a flashlight and a knife with you just in case you need it. In my opinion, you will enjoy

this

camping trip very much and if you are not sure that you can handle it by yourself, I would love to come with you and be your companion. I look forward to hearing from you, stay safe. Yours sincerely,

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task achievement

Ensure all possible disadvantages are clearly outlined.

coherence cohesion

Provide a clearer conclusion or closing statement for enhanced cohesion.

task achievement

The letter maintains a friendly and supportive tone throughout, suitable for writing to a friend.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing statements are appropriately used, enhancing the personal touch of the letter.

coherence cohesion

Each paragraph housing a singular idea contributes to the overall clarity and effectiveness of the writing.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

198 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

adventure
serenity
outdoors
refreshing
hustle and bustle
inherent
foster
distractions
cost-effective
unpredictable
wildlife
adequate preparation
physical demands
researching
campsite
lasting memories
mutual interests

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