A friend of yours is thinking of going to a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: explain why you think your friend would enjoy camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go on camping with your friend this summer
Dear Marija,
I am very pleased to hear that you
finally
decided to go on a camping holiday and asked for my advice. I look forward to helping you and giving advice from my own experience and perspective.
I think that you will enjoy this
summer camping trip because the weather for the next couple of weeks is going to be great and the nature and landscapes that you will explore for ten days are going to be very beautiful and moving. In my opinion, you will feel uplifted and come back mentally improved and rested. However
, you have to prepare for the possible weather changes, so take very practical clothes with you, that you could
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can
use
not only for warmer days but Verb problem
wear
also
for colder ones. Also
prepare for wild animals that could get in your way, take a flashlight and a knife with you just in case you need it.
In my opinion, you will enjoy Add a comma
Also,
this
camping trip very much and if you are not sure that you can handle it by yourself, I would love to come with you and be your companion. I look forward to hearing from you, stay safe.
Yours sincerely,Submitted by oimigle on
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task achievement
Ensure all possible disadvantages are clearly outlined.
coherence cohesion
Provide a clearer conclusion or closing statement for enhanced cohesion.
task achievement
The letter maintains a friendly and supportive tone throughout, suitable for writing to a friend.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing statements are appropriately used, enhancing the personal touch of the letter.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph housing a singular idea contributes to the overall clarity and effectiveness of the writing.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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