Some people believe that it is the residents that are responsible for the cleaning and tidying the street. While others believe it is the responsibility of the government. Discuss both sides and give your opinions

Environmental sanitation has become a problem in recent years. There is a strong debate that the street should be

clean

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by the

government

rather than the people living in them.

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discussing

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both views with my opinion. On one hand, the residents should be in charge of tidying their

surrounding

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because they are the ones living in it, so if they neglect it,it can result

to

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some

illness

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illnesses

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such

as malaria.

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,

an

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environment with

stagnant

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a stagnant

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drainage system,and the individual residing there are waiting for the

government

to clean it up, the stagnant water will attract mosquitoes to lay eggs in it and

then

they develop and start biting people which causes malaria but if they decided to help themselves by draining it or removing the obstacle blocking it,

then

all

this

issue will be avoided.

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,

clearing

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of bushes

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should be done by residents because

this

can cause different reptiles and insects

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around their

apartment

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which the

government

may not be aware of.

On the other hand

, the

government

can tidy the streets,if it

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for

a major events

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like

thanksgiving

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ceremony

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,

also

they can assign appropriate authority to help supervise the

surrounding

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and

the

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take care of places that have no occupants. In conclusion,I think the

government

shouldn't be

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ones

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cleaning the street but

instead

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they should assist the occupants in some activities like proper disposal of

wastes

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,inspecting and providing a holiday once

in

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a month for environmental sanitation to enable those that work

everyday

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have a day off to take care of their environment.