You and a friend recently went on a holiday together. There is a problem with the photos you have taken during the holiday. Write a letter to your friend to ask for a particular shot. In your letter tell him/her about the problem with your photos say which photo you would like him/her to send you explain why you need this photo.
Dear Javid
I am just writing to let you know that I have issues with regard to the photos that are related to the
last
meeting.
I have had some concerns during the last
few days.Unfortunately, a virus poisoned my cell phone,therefore
,I was obliged to restart it.That is
why all of the files and pictures were deleted.
The photos we took in front of the restaurants together are one of the best.I would be extremely grateful if you could send it to me.There were all of my group mates.Even with whom I have not met for a long time.
The primary reason I am so interested in these pictures is that I am just passionate about collecting and keeping valuable photos.This
is simply because I sometimes look at them to recall old memories.Moreover
,we do not have any pictures jointly since university time.
I am looking forward to catching up with you soon
Sincerely
Malik Maliki.Submitted by malikli.malik1995 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite