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Psychologist are looking for a new way to treat mental disorders. Do you agree or disagree with this idea.

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The number of
people
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 who have a mental disorder has been increasing dramatically to the changing of the world situation
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 technology and competition in the workplace. Many psychologists are trying to help them by looking for other ways of
treatment
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. I strongly agree with the idea to find out how to treat the
problem
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. In the following paragraph, the reason to support my opinion will be outlined.
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 with, we have so many ways of treating mental disorders nowadays
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 as counselling, medicine balancing brain neurotransmitters or relaxation. There is a good alternative but the result depends on the person referred some
people
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 can respond to medicine while others cannot so looking for a new way of
treatment
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 not only has so many advantages for the
problem
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 but
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 help other
people
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 who are in a
problem
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.
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, different type of mental disorders has
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different type of treatments.
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, for anxiety disorder, some
people
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 are cured by taking medicine
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 some are non-response to antipsychotic medicines.
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, some experts believe that psychotic diseases are caused by Toxoplasma gondii which is a small micro-organism that should find other ways to treat or some
people
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 think some diseases
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 as bipolar disorder and genetic diseases cannot treat. So if we know how to treat the
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 well. It will be a big change in their life. In conclusion, I strongly agree with the idea of psychologists finding a new way to treat mental disorders because nowadays it is shown that
treatment
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 could not help every
people
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 or it is not effective
treatment
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 so if psychologists discover a new
treatment
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 it will be useful in the future.
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