Psychologist are looking for a new way to treat mental disorders. Do you agree or disagree with this idea.

The number of

people

who have a mental disorder has been increasing dramatically to the changing of the world situation

for example

technology and competition in the workplace. Many psychologists are trying to help them by looking for other ways of

treatment

. I strongly agree with the idea to find out how to treat the

problem

. In the following paragraph, the reason to support my opinion will be outlined.

To begin

with, we have so many ways of treating mental disorders nowadays

such

as counselling, medicine balancing brain neurotransmitters or relaxation. There is a good alternative but the result depends on the person referred some

people

can respond to medicine while others cannot so looking for a new way of

treatment

not only has so many advantages for the

problem

but

also

help other

people

who are in a

problem

.

Additionally

, different type of mental disorders has

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different type of treatments.

For instance

, for anxiety disorder, some

people

are cured by taking medicine

however

some are non-response to antipsychotic medicines.

Furthermore

, some experts believe that psychotic diseases are caused by Toxoplasma gondii which is a small micro-organism that should find other ways to treat or some

people

think some diseases

such

as bipolar disorder and genetic diseases cannot treat. So if we know how to treat the

problem

well. It will be a big change in their life. In conclusion, I strongly agree with the idea of psychologists finding a new way to treat mental disorders because nowadays it is shown that

treatment

could not help every

people

or it is not effective

treatment

so if psychologists discover a new

treatment

it will be useful in the future.