Some people think that television has destroyed communication among friends and family. In what extent do you agree or disagree
It is often thought that communication has been
ruin
among family and friends by watching Wrong verb form
ruined
television
. In
my perspective, I strongly agree that Change preposition
From
television
is one of the root causes of this
destroying relations. However
, its
not only spoil Replace the word
it's
it is
connection
but Correct article usage
the connection
also
our precious time
.
To begin
with, I want to aver that television
is the
cutting-edge technology along with one of Correct article usage
apply
easiest
and most primary entertainment Correct article usage
the easiest
way
in our busy Fix the agreement mistake
ways
life
. But according
new statistical report, the proliferation of using Add the preposition
toaccording
television
has been enhanced then
before. Replace the word
than
However
, students are got addicted and spent good
amount of Add an article
a good
time
on
watching different Change preposition
apply
comedy
, movies, and sportsFix the agreement mistake
comedies
Add the comma(s)
, as a result,
as a result
the
marks are going down. Meanwhile, adult people have Change the word
their
also
chosen this
as an enjoyment purpose. Over-using something that could be harmful, that
replicates Correct pronoun usage
apply
on
Change preposition
apply
this
situation, as a result
, the bonds between kit and kin are affected. In addition
, it has also
been keeping greatly
bad impact on work Add an article
the greatly
life
and healthy life
.
To alleviate this
problem, we should enhance the awareness of less use of television
, and advise them to keep connection
to relatives and neighbours and do Add an article
a connection
the connection
the
other outdoor or indoor things which will Correct article usage
apply
makes
Change the verb form
make
life
far more batter then
watching television
in leisure time
. Specially
Replace the word
Especially
student
can fully concentrate Fix the agreement mistake
students
in
their studies Change preposition
on
that
is Correct pronoun usage
which
the
crucial part of their career, and they can do some outdoor activities which could develop their knowledge Correct article usage
a
instead
of pay
attention to different programs.
In conclusion, I really Wrong verb form
paying
belief
that, though Replace the word
believe
television
has some benefits but
it should better choose outdoor and indoor activities on Remove the conjunction
apply
time
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