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Many people use written language in less formal and relaxed way. Does this development have advantages and disadvantages?

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Nowadays, a lot of
people
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 written phrases in an informal and more relaxed way. I think
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 development has not only disadvantages
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 but there are a lot of advantages too. I will explain my point of view in
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 fact, the younger generation sometimes
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 written
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 all their life, but they don’t understand that they damage their
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 with that.
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, our
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 is our history, and when
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children speak only with written
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, they forget about common phrases and words
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 their grandparents and before them used.
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,
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 type of communication has several advantages.
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 of all,
people
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 save
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 when they
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, the person is used to written
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 and
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feels comfortable using informal
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.
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, written
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 creates a branch of new words which are popular
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 young
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. What is more, my elder brother likes playing computer games and one of the main tasks is to give information in
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 because the information can be useful for your victory. The player can save
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 to say these short phrases and words. To conclude, I think that it is normal to
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 in our daily life, but
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people
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 shouldn’t forget about the literary style of his
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 is so brilliant, it is the way of
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communication
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, and we should save them, to try to
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 in a less formal way.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • informality
  • digital communication
  • texting
  • social media
  • instant messaging
  • generational shifts
  • brevity
  • personal expression
  • language standards
  • erosion
  • interlocutors
  • emojis
  • internet slang
  • academic contexts
  • language learning
  • misunderstandings
  • language teaching
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