In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
Upcoming era,
the
whole types of Correct article usage
apply
vehicles
will be driven without driver
and the only public who will ride in these automobiles are passengers. In my opinion, I believe that Fix the agreement mistake
drivers
this
innovation can bring about more advantages for society compared to any drawbacks it might bring.
First
of all, I believe that driverless cars
are more beneficial in modern society, nowadays. Automated vehicles
will decrease accident
issues which is
grow up extremely day by day. Change the verb form
are
However
, when it is coming on highway
, it Add an article
the highway
obey
traffic rules. Due to forbidding traffic Change the verb form
obeys
rule
, people will be able to move on anywhere on road without difficulties and reduce Fix the agreement mistake
rules
accident
. Fix the agreement mistake
accidents
In addition
, self-driving benefited
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benefits
for
industry owners. They never thought that who Change preposition
apply
driven
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drove
cars
and how to deliver goods. They easily deliver products on time by automated vehicles
. For instance
, A
famous Correct article usage
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technologists
carried out research and proved automated Fix the agreement mistake
technologist
vehicles
follow all instruction
of Fix the agreement mistake
instructions
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the computer
computer
and it Fix the agreement mistake
computers
minimize
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minimizes
accident
problems.
Meanwhile, we still have several disadvantages will
face innovative automated Correct pronoun usage
that will
vehicles
. Firstly
, driverless
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if driverless
cars
increase on roadway
many drivers will be unemployed Fix the agreement mistake
roadways
that
can affect our economic growth. Unemployed people are the curse in the nations. Correct pronoun usage
which
Furthermore
, when automated vehicles
faced any technical difficulties that it
repairing Correct pronoun usage
apply
cost
will Fix the agreement mistake
costs
excessive
. Add a missing verb
be excessive
The automated
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Automated
cars
design fully computer based
for Add a hyphen
computer-based
this
reason its
parts Correct pronoun usage
apply
is
expensive and repair will be consumed. Change the verb form
are
For example
, automated vehicles
which
are expensive Correct pronoun usage
apply
that
is why people do not want to travel Correct pronoun usage
which
on
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in
it
and Correct pronoun usage
them
it
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its
negative
affect modern society.
To conclude, I strongly believe reducing Change the word
negatively
accident
and fast delivering production far outweigh any of the minor disadvantages that could result from Fix the agreement mistake
accidents
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a negative
negative
affecting Change the word
negatively
economy
and unnecessary repairing Correct article usage
the economy
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cost to
costvto
the highway.Correct your spelling
costs on
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