In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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whole types of
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will be driven without
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and the only public who will ride in these automobiles are passengers. In my opinion, I believe that
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innovation can bring about more advantages for society compared to any drawbacks it might bring.
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of all, I believe that driverless
cars
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are more beneficial in modern society, nowadays. Automated
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will decrease
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issues which
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grow up extremely day by day.
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, when it is coming on
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, it
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traffic rules. Due to forbidding traffic
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, people will be able to move on anywhere on road without difficulties and reduce
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accident
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.
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, self-driving
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for
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industry owners. They never thought that who
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cars
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and how to deliver goods. They easily deliver products on time by automated
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.
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,
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famous
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carried out research and proved automated
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follow all
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instructions
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of
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the computer
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computer
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and it
minimize
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accident
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problems. Meanwhile, we still have several disadvantages
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that will
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face innovative automated
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.
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,
driverless
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if driverless
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cars
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increase on
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many drivers will be unemployed
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can affect our economic growth. Unemployed people are the curse in the nations.
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, when automated
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faced any technical difficulties
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repairing
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will
excessive
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The automated
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cars
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design fully
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for
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reason
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parts
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expensive and repair will be consumed.
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, automated
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which
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are expensive
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that
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is why people do not want to travel
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it
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and
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affect modern society. To conclude, I strongly believe reducing
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accident
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accidents
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and fast delivering production far outweigh any of the minor disadvantages that could result from
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negative
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negatively
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affecting
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the economy
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and unnecessary repairing
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cost to
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costs on
the highway.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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