In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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whole types of

vehicles

will be driven without

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and the only public who will ride in these automobiles are passengers. In my opinion, I believe that

this

innovation can bring about more advantages for society compared to any drawbacks it might bring.

First

of all, I believe that driverless

cars

are more beneficial in modern society, nowadays. Automated

vehicles

will decrease

accident

issues which

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grow up extremely day by day.

However

, when it is coming on

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, it

obey

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traffic rules. Due to forbidding traffic

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, people will be able to move on anywhere on road without difficulties and reduce

accident

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.

In addition

, self-driving

benefited

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for

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industry owners. They never thought that who

driven

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cars

and how to deliver goods. They easily deliver products on time by automated

vehicles

.

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,

A

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famous

technologists

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carried out research and proved automated

vehicles

follow all

instruction

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of

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computer

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minimize

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accident

problems. Meanwhile, we still have several disadvantages

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face innovative automated

vehicles

.

Firstly

,

driverless

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cars

increase on

roadway

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many drivers will be unemployed

that

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can affect our economic growth. Unemployed people are the curse in the nations.

Furthermore

, when automated

vehicles

faced any technical difficulties

that it

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repairing

cost

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will

excessive

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.

The automated

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cars

design fully

computer based

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for

this

reason

its

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parts

is

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expensive and repair will be consumed.

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, automated

vehicles

which

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are expensive

that

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is why people do not want to travel

on

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it

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and

it

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negative

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affect modern society. To conclude, I strongly believe reducing

accident

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and fast delivering production far outweigh any of the minor disadvantages that could result from

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negative

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affecting

economy

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and unnecessary repairing

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cost to

costvto

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costs on

the highway.