Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shop and restaurant.Why do you think people waste food? what can be done to reduce the amount they throw away?

While some
people
around the world are having hard
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to get
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foods
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, some other
people
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easy to gain and
also
waste
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foods that they bought from the store. In my point of view, it is a problem that needs to be solved by
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analyzing
analizing
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its main reason.
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essay will elaborate
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reason
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and alternative
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for
this
issue.
To begin
, in developed countries, I think the abundance of
food
is real and common
,
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because
people
in these countries can buy anything that they want in several near restaurants easily.
Furthermore
, the growth of
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makes
people
have
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more money to spend, especially
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consumer expenditures which include
food
and drink expenses.
Subsequently
, some individuals tend to buy
food
more than their
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and keep it for themselves in their refrigerator.
However
,
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the
next
day, they usually prefer to eat some fresh
food
rather than eat the
food
that they stored in the refrigerator,
therefore
their
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food
will become waste.
Although
it is their right to consume any dish,
people
should aware that wasting
food
is
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an
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unappropriate
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manner, especially when there
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another
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human
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that
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in many other places. Government should make a policy that every
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must remind their own customer to avoid overconsumption. The
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can be conducted in the form of advertising,
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campaign, or text on the billboards. To sum up, personally, I believe that
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food
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is mainly because
customers'
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overconsumption, and it can be reduced if all of the
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such
as authorities, restaurants,
food
company
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, and citizens have awareness
about
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the issue. So,
people
will only buy
food
according to their
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in the future.
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