These days people in some countries are living in a “throwaway” society which means people use things in a short time then throw them away. What do you think is the cause and what problem will it lead to?

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In today's society, we have been living in a society where

products

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are thrown away in a short term. Even if those

products

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are still useable, individuals tend to buy another one to make them satisfied. In

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writing, the reason why

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has happened and what issues will they result in will be discussed.

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, because of the method of mass production, it became easier to buy

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reasonably.

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, there is no choice but to get them to make their life improved. In Japan,

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, there are stores where most

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are available for 100 yen and people may find it not difficult to buy things because all

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are not pricy.

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can eventually lead to air pollution because of the massive use of plastic and the method of production.

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, most of those reasonable

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are easily breakable. It can be said that to make

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cheaply, their quality of them does not necessarily have to be durable.

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, people have to purchase again and again in the

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place because of a lack of durability of items. Since most people do not care about the quality, each person's ways of thinking towards the value of items will be varied. To

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elaborate, the value of luxury brands may be underestimated because many opt for less expensive choices. In conclusion, in spite of the potential that mass-produced items may be able to make our lives comfortable, those

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could be serious issues

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as environmental pollution and luxury brands can be out of choice when seeing in the long run. I believe that each production process should be sustainable so that environmental problems can be softened the impact and we should be aware of what problems there are in making cheaper

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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These days people in some countries are living in a “throwaway” society which means people use things in a short time then throw them away. What do you think is the cause and what problem will it lead to?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Last month you had a holiday overseas.Where you stay with some friends.They just sent you some holiday photos. Write a letter your friends,in your letter. •thank them for the holiday and the photos •explain why do you didn't write earlier •invite them to come and stay with you

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvato ntages of this development? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience to support your arguments

In many cities, there is little control on the design and construction of new houses. Some people think that people can choose to build houses in their own styles instead of building them with the same style as the old house style in local areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In many developing countries there’s an increasing movement of workers from rural areas into the city Why do you think this happens? What problems can this cause?