some people say that advetising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things . others people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it . discuss both the views and give your opinion?
Some individuals believe that
advertisements
change our mind to buy things, meanwhile
others Add a comma
,meanwhile
says
it is nothing if we no longer concentrated on it. I would certainly disagree Change the verb form
say
the
point, to change Change preposition
with the
the
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people
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people's
mind
to buy things by tempting them.
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minds
Firstly
, advertisement is a very crucial one in businesses and marketing. However
, without an
advertising Correct article usage
apply
people
do not get aware about
the Change preposition
of
product
, even though it was released by a big company like google, apple, etc. As a result
, it will tempt the
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people
to buy the product
. In addition
, people
would definitely loose
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lose
the
control over financial management. In previous days we only see ads Correct article usage
apply
in
television but now we are seeing Change preposition
on
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them in
in
computers and mobile phones. Change preposition
on
Moreover
, these advertisements
generated is
based on our interests and Correct subject-verb agreement
are
it
could be a possible threat Correct pronoun usage
apply
for
our privacy.
There are other Change preposition
to
set
of Change the wording
sets
people
, who usually do not get attracted to the product
even if it popped up to them for thousand times. On the other hand
, they may get frustrated some time
about seeing the Correct your spelling
sometimes
advertisements
repeatedly. To overcome this
kind Change preposition
of issues
issues
, adding Fix the agreement mistake
issue
a
functionality like closing or never Remove the article
apply
show
again the advertisement would be highly helpful because if a person likes it, either he/she would definitely buy or just skip it.
In conclusion, even though Wrong verb form
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advertisements
are the backbone for
marketing, Change preposition
of
it
should be limited. In my way of thinking, promotion of the Correct pronoun usage
they
product
is necessary but just to make the people
aware about it and not to tempt it.Submitted by usprem02 on
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