At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweight the disadvantages ?

the number of population is one of the things that can affect

development

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if

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of

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a

country

. Nowadays, the major proportion of people in some countries

are

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young age

adult

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adults

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in comparison to the number of

the

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apply

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elderly ones. I believe

this

is a good thing and benefit the

country

. On one hand, having more

adult

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adults

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to

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work in different

jobs

specially

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the hard

one

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ones

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, may have

direct

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impact

in

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on

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developing many

area

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areas

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in the

country

.

In

addition

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their power will continue for many

years

, so there is no fear regarding the

future

of the

country

because it already has

labours

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and in the

future

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their experience will increase which will

be consider

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as another value. Youth have a lot of energy that if it been directed into the right

bath

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path

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,

it

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could have a significant effect on the

country

's development.

For instance

, Ethiopia opened many

jobs

exclusively for young

adult

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adults

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,

subsequently

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these

jobs

showed the highest

developing

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development

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rate in the government according to the

last

report.

On the other hand

, elderly people have many life experiences and

knowledge

regarding different things,

thats

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that's

is because they

been

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have been

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through a lot of different

situation

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situations

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and worked in various

jobs

for many

years

.

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, in

China

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,China

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many executive

committies

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committees

are consisted mainly of elderly individuals because of their

knowledge

and experiences which will develop their outcomes in many ways. In conclusion, while

elderly

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the elderly

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have the

knowledge

and the experience, adults have the power to learn and work for many

years

with

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using the

knowledge

and the experience they had. In my opinion, I believe having many adults in the community is critical to ensure the

future

of

this

community. Because

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adults

adluts

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adults

will learn and use their

knowledge

and experiences for many

years

in the

future